Student ID: 08169
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates
| ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 1-01a (2009.04.08) | 2009.4.8
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| 334
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| 1-01b (2009.04.20) | 2009.6.11
| 7
| 323
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| 1-02a (2009.06.01) | 2009.6.5
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| 303
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| 1-02b (2009.07.06) | 2009.7.1
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| 304
| 4
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| 1-03a (2009.06.29) | 2009.7.1
| 5
| 383
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| 1-03b (2009.07.13) |
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
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The best essay this semester is Self-introduction (3), because of I was interesting when I wrote and I planned to go to the New Zealand. So this essay is very useful, but I think difficult to write about oneself.
2.0. Comments
| Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* |
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| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | 2009.07.01 10:11
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| I agree with her and it is friendly.
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| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | 2009.07.01 18:57
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| This comment is funny.
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| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | 2009.04.15
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| interesting and friendly
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| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.4.15 10:24
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| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 28
| answer the question and friendly
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| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | 2009.07.13 20:49
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| I agree and I'm glad.
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| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- |
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| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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Comments show in the footer. It is useful for me, because I read post oneself and the comment in the same time.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
There are not so many comments in my blog.
There is question about the content of essay. I want to write in detailed.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles
| Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
| Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
| BR 1-01 | 2009.4.21
| 264
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| BR 1-02 | 2009.6.5
| 121
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| BR 1-03 | 2009.6.11
| 224
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| BR 1-04 | 2009.7.1
| 154
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| BR 1-05 | 2009.7.1
| 74
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| BR 1-06 | 2009.7.7
| 185
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| BR 1-07 | 2009.7.8
| 99
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| BR 1-08 | 2009.7.19
| 145
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| BR 1-09 | 2009.7.19
| 115
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| BR 1-10 | 2009.7.19
| 164
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| BR 1-11 | 2009.7.20
| 113
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| BR 1-12 | 2009.7.20
| 119
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
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The best book review this semester is The Last of the Mohicans. I thought anything, for example, about Indians and history. I could learn anything. I read this book the same time; I watched the same title movie. So this thing helps to understand about this story.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ✓
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| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ✓
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| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ✓
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| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ✓
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| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ✓
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| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ✓
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ✓
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
I post photos for easy to understand.
Change the font.
It is sort out labels.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
When I write the essay, I make the paragraph; Topic Sentence, Supporting Sentence and then Concluding Sentence.
I use examples.
I post photos.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
I should devise the display.
I make links; media, other blogs and so on.
I should write more.
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
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