2010年1月16日土曜日

BR2-11:Animal Legends




I read Animal Legends. There are three stories in this book. Today, I want to review about The cat and the rat.

Now, rat and cat don’t get along with each other. But, long ago they were good friends. Long ago, they lived island together. They were so happy but always they were bored. One day, the rat had an idea. He told that look for somewhere to live. Cat was agreed. They made a raft and then go to sea. Rat rowed a raft and cat sleep. Rat feel hungry, he ate a raft. They got wet and swim to island. Cat was very angry. And then, cat chase rat.

This story is very funny. It is look like cartoon: Tom&Jerry!! It is so cute❤

[127 words]

2010年1月15日金曜日

essay2-02b:Website

Website is very convenient for study English. It is interesting that watch interest of websites. Internet websites are very useful for me. I want to review about three favorite websites. Before essay, I wrote about New Zealand website only. However, this time I want to write about other favorite website too. My favorite websites are written by Johnny Depp, SHONEN JUMP and New Zealand. These things are very interest for me.

First, I’ll talk about Johnny Depp. Everyone knows that he is very popular and famous actor. His masterpiece is PIRATES of the CARIBBEAN. This movie is so interesting. He played main character Captain Jack Sparrow. He was so cool!!

He was born in Kentucky on June 9th 1963. Surprisingly, he is 47 years old this year. But, he is popular among the young person to old person. He is a today’s top Hollywood actor. Website say when he was teenage, he pursue a career in rock and roll music. He was member of some bands. Among of his bands, the most famous band is The Kids.

Since then, he decided to try acting; it was suggestion from his wife. His first great hit movie was Edward Scissorhands(1990). My most favorite his movie is What’s Eating Gilbert Grape(1993). Please watch this movie at a once. I think he played many unique characters. There are some scandal about him, but now he has good relationship with French singer Venessa Paradis, relocating to Paris with his two children. Maybe, he is happy now.

http://www.johnnydepp.com/

Next website is SHONEN JUMP. Maybe everyone knows this name. SHONEN JUMP is most famous Japanese magazine. Recently, Japanese comics are very famous and popular all over the world. So, this website introduce about comics of SHONEN JUMP. Usually, I read comics in Japanese. But, this website was written in English. It was very interest for me.

Especially, I like ONEPIECE. Of course, in this website there is ONEPIECE site. It is interesting that read in English. I learn about how to say in English.

http://shonenjump.viz.com/

Last website is New Zealand. This year, I took the course of summer study abroad program. I planned to visit New Zealand. However, I couldn’t go there. Because of, Swine full. When I want to learn about New Zealand, I use the website. New Zealand is very interesting and there are many amazing place. New Zealand has many beautiful views too. So many movies made a film in there. Website of New Zealand introduce about anything; culture, history, food and life and so on. This website’s English is easy to understand.

[429 words]

BR2-10:The Burglar's Breakfast


The main character is Alfie Briggs. He was a burglar, but he was a good man. Always he worked in the night. So his main meal in the day was breakfast. He loves breakfast. One day’s after work, he want to eat breakfast. He thought there was a cornflake in his house. But, there was not. He looked for a house. His breakfast were stolen by animals; cat, goat, fox and ants. After all, he went to a café and then he ate breakfast. Then he found job because, he didn’t want to burglar. He was become the Stop-A-Thief Detective Agency. He arrested a burglar. And then he ate breakfast with burglar.

To eat breakfast is very important for us. If I didn’t eat breakfast, I will sleepy all the day. I have to study so I should eat breakfast!!

[140 words]

MOTHITHUKI




Every year, I pound steamed rice into rice cake with my family. It was very important event for my family. Because of relatives, family and other people gathered in my house. We had a good time.

MOTHITHUKI is very interesting but so hard work. We have to pound again and again. So, we keep pound by turns. Recently, almost people use a MOTHITHUKI Machine. However we use a mortar and a mallet. MOCHI is very delicious and beautiful. I think that my house made MOCHI is most delicious!! We can eat hot MOCHI, so just finished. We ate MOCHI with soy sauce and laver, soybean flour and fermented soybeans. I love MOCHI!!

[112 words]

OSETHI&OZOUNI


The last day of the year, I cooked OSETHI and AZOUNI with my mother. I never cooked that. So, my mother thought me about anything. It was so interesting and I was enjoyed.

OSETHI is very convenient dish. We cooked OSETHI in December 31, and then we ate OSETHI in January 1. Mother don’t need make dish. She can enjoy and relax with family. OSETHI is very colorful and luxurious. We hope the safety of my family. OSETHI is auspicious. I filled an OSETHI box. I think it was good!! It was beautiful!!

OZOUNI is auspicious dish too. We ate OZOUNI in New Year’s Day. OZOUNI is a soup with Omochi and other vegetables and meats. I prepared with my mother. I don’t know how to cook and what seasoning used. My mother took some seasoning in soup. It was so fast. She looked so cool. I become like her!!

[150 words]

MAORI




1. Introduction
Last year, I took Mrs. Tsutsui’s class to understand intercultural and I get to be interested in HAKA and Maori culture. Then I decided to look into Maori culture as theme of summer study abroad program.
2. In Kumamoto
① What the tribe of Maori is like?
Maori is aborigines who settled in the present of New Zealand first. It is about one thousand years ago that Maori came all the way from Hawaiki where their ancestors’ hometown is. Maori is “TANGATA WHENUA”, aborigines, and Maori culture is inseparable from live of New Zealand. Also, Maori culture is the cornerstone of New Zealand culture and it is an important part of New Zealand culture. New Zealand has a population of about 4,000,000 and fifteen percent of New Zealand is descended from Maori. “Maori” is a race that constitutes tribes. Land tribes are called “IWI” in Maori language. Maori culture is known to its abundance and variety from traditionally and modern ones.
Maori kept the ground of New Zealand to themselves until about two hundred years ago. Australia is a long way from New Zealand. Therefore Maori had nothing to do with other tribes, and both their own culture and life style developed. Immigrants who came from Europe between Maori broke out a lot of issues. And then, the issues made war, so Maori lost most of their grounds. Presently, the population of the Europe increased more than that of Maori. Maori had to change the traditional life in order to survive. However, Maori have lived as a tribe since then. Most of the unique culture of Maori has lived too. Now, Maori speaks English, wears the same clothes of a common New Zealander, and lives the kind of same


house as them. In spite of Maori having different convictions and faith, they are fully aware of having history and background.
② What Maori culture is like?
Maori grew crops, cut trees down for establishment a village and then they started to settle down. It is very important thing for Maori to be an owner of the ground and have whatever relationship, because they were a big pride of each tribe. As Maori made more progress with settling down, a sense of unity developed to nature; like the mountain and river in their ground. And then nature is consecrate. Farming is very important thing to them, because farming stabilizes their live. Occasionally, farming is an occasion for war. Ground is stand for power and dignity.
Maori was not a Christian. They had original religion about worship many gods and the spirit. The religion rule everyday life. What is particularly important is "TAPU". This word mean holy and forbidden so it's same as "taboo". The matter considered to "TAPU" was certain places, things, actions, sometimes humankinds. People followed a clergyman who is called "TOFUNGA", and they kept away from him. In addition to that, they treated him very carefully and respectful. Otherwise, they believed to be terrible unfortunates and misfortunes.
Same as the religion, art is an important part in the Maori live. Maori likes to decorate. They troubled and used techniques to produce everything carefully. Maoris' art style is peculiar to this part of New Zealand. Maori find various materials and then, them though of new techniques and designs. So, Maoris' art became unique. Sculpture is male work. Textiles are female work. Maoris' male made the most elaborate sculpture. Maori tattooed on their body. They like tattoo however they used a small chisel and they direct to chisel on them skin. This way was involves intense pain. Male tattooed more than female. They tattooed the hips and thigh too. Females made various articles how to knit and weave. They used the plants about grows in New Zealand naturally. Maori didn't know a metal, so they use "POUNAMU", this is a green stone and it is a kind of jade, they made arms and ornaments. These articles are precious of Maori.
When white mans and Europeans came to New Zealand for invasion, Maori protect their original tradition and conform to European social slowly.
③ How Maori culture is succeeded?
New Zealand has a well-received country because human relationships are very good. However, there are a few problems between New Zealander and Maori. They are trying hard to build good relationships each other.
There are many sightseeing areas of Maori in New Zealand. We can learn about Maoris’ culture. I want to introduce some sightseeing areas of Maori.
・ Rotorua Museum of Art and History
・ Ohinemutu Maori Village
・ Tamaki Maori Village
Almost areas are in the Rotorua.
WAKA for a ceremony which is a symbol of a tradition and a custom for each tribe of Maori are main attraction of public events. A meeting is held on February 6th when is WAITANGI DAY every year, WAKA for a ceremony are opened to the public.
HAKA is famous for rugby team and ALL BLACKS of New Zealand. Also, a national athletic meet is held once two years.
Maori is fully aware of our culture lost, they determine protect their culture. Consequently, “MAORITANGA” has heightened interest in the New Zealand society. “MAORITANGA” means “Maoris’ own way” and “characteristic of Maori”. This is the revive movement of the Maori culture.
3. Conclusion
Maori culture is very unique and interest. I think Maori culture is different from the idea which I had expected. I knew “HONGI” which is a Maoris’ greeting only. The cultures which I know thought this investigation was faith, art and sculpture. I was impressed with volition and endeavor of Maori to maintain their traditions. I got to want to go to New Zealand more and more.
4. Bibliography
Look at the following example:
Gream Willem (1989). The translator, Chiyo Kawadu. The Maori of New Zealand. Tokyo: LIBRIO publication

MAORI CULTURE Retrieved May 26, 2009 from the World Web:
http://www.newzealand.com/travel/ja/media/topic-index/maori-culture/maori-culture_home.cfm




[980 words]

2010年1月6日水曜日

Portfolio for Writing IV (2009-10)

Student ID: 08169



Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A OR 1C

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. OVERVIEW

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)



1.0. ESSAYS

(See: Note 3, below.)


Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).


1.1. Showcase
Short titles with links to blog posts
Dates
yyyy.mm.dd

W
C
L
P
M
2-01a (2009.10.07)

2009.10.13

3

312

13

0

0

0

2-01b (2009.10.21)

2009.10.21

7

351

0

0

0

0

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2-02a (2009.11.04)

2009.11.18

5

402

0

0

0

0

2-02b (2009.11.18)


Website


2009.1.15


7

429

0

0

0

0
(2-02c)
















2-03a (2009.12.02)

2009.12.2

5

401

6

0

0

0

2-03b (2009.12.18/22)

2009.12.18

8

693

1

0

0

0

(2-03c)
















Totals
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35

2588

20

0

0

0



Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post


1.2. Most Improved Essay

(See: Note 4, below.)


Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.
  • ...The most improvement essay is Language Story. I have two reasons. First, this essay is the longest in my essays. Next, this essay teach me that "Don't forget your original intention."



2.0. COMMENTS

Showcase
Short titles of posts with links
Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

2009.10.14

34

That movie is very fast and difficult. So, this comment is not so bad.

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*


Korean

2009.12.9


21


It was a good question because, I asked.

2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*


Tull's Coffee


2009.10,14


40


She agree with me and teach me about her favorite coffee shop.

2.4. Most comments on:
Short titles of posts with link
Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd
Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*


Favorite Places


2009.10.13


217


Many friends agree and advice for me.

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2009.10.13

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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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61

I conveyed thank you and answer these questions.

2.4.2. Any of your other posts*


Enjoy!! TOKYO DISNEY SEA!!


2009.8.7


54

They send me the "Enjoy" messages.

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2009.8.7

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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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48

I post new diary, that is repond.











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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.


2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
  • ... I displayed comments in footer widget. I can read comments with my post sentences. That is easy to understand.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • ....When I read my friend's blog and wrote a comment, I want to know more about my friends. And I want to convey my feelings.
  • ....Comments helped me when I want to write about new thing. Comments made me happy. In addition to I can get new information.


3.0. BOOK REVIEWS

3.1. Showcase
Short titles with links
Dates: yyyy.mm.dd
Words
Comments
Example:
2007.05.16
39
1
BR 2-01
2009.8.4
72
0
BR 2-02
2009.8.4
74
0
BR 2-03
2009.8.8
107
0
BR 2-04
2009.8.8
165
1
BR 2-05
2010.1.4
90
0
BR 2-06
2010.1.6
75
0
BR 2-07
2010.1.6
117
0
BR 2-08
2010.1.6
92
0
BR 2-09
2010.1.6
65
0
BR 2-10
2010.1.15
140
0
BR 2-11
2010.1.16
127
0
BR 2-12




BR 2-13




BR 2-14




BR 2-15




BR 2-16




BR 2-17




BR 2-18














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Totals:


Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).


3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.


✿...I think the best book review is How Elephants Lost Their Wings. One reason is the most interesting book and I can review very simple. Second reason is I think the most easy to understand book review.

4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA



Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?





4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?





4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?





4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?





4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar?





4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)





  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")





  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)





  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)




  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)





  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")





4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?





  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

    • 6 other labels attached to three or more posts

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4.3. Links and media
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4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?





  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?





  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

    • 27 posts including photos or other graphics

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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?





  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?

    • 0 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)

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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?




  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?

    • 0 posts including other media

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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:

    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...



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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.

    1. ... (short link, date)
    2. ... (short link, date)
    3. ... (short link, date)



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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. ...I have to more post regularly. I tryed to use more defferent grammar.
  2. ...If I was all post sentences with photo, my blog more interesting and layout become good.
  3. ...This semester, I was changed formatting. So I could refresh.



5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).
  • ...Blog is interesting. However, Blog is very difficult for me. Because, to use a computer well was hard thing for me.
  • ...It was very hard to post regularly. First, I don't know how to use Blog and what about write.
  • ... Homework was very hard too. I think need to much time.


6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS

  • ...It is post sentences with many photos, then Blog become more interesting and funny.
  • ...It was very difficult and hard to continue Blog. I had to more post. I must get over that my habit of laziness. It is important to continue.
  • ... I want to includ posts media like youtube. Then my Blog more interesting. However, I don't know ways.


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  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
  4. The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
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