2009年5月20日水曜日
unversity life
My university life is interesting, because classes are very beneficial. I have much homework. It is very hard. I think don’t neglect my homework, but I am lazy in my studies. I want to effort more. The other hand, my high school life is very busy. I have a part time job. I work three days a week. My work is hard but interesting, because I love movies and music. (70 words)
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I'll comment about essay in the Writing III. You need more sentences in the introductory and the concluding paragragh. It's better to put graghes or picture and so on.
Your essay is good including many point.
Thanks, Hikaru
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